As i looked into his eyes
And found his longing stare
I stopped myself from saying words
That would show how much i care
I put my hand upto his face
To hold my feelings in
I wouldn't say the words again
To show my love for him
The last time I had told him
How much he meant to me
He put my hands away from his
And said to leave him be
I never spoke the words again
For fear of his deep fright
I thought it was the last time
Until that blissful night
His fingers traced around my face
Pushing hair away
And I was quite unprepared
For what he was to say
My heart beat quickly,my head raced on
I thought that I might cry
He looked as if he might faint-
Imagine this strong guy
But never would I be more impressed
With anything he'd do
Than when he took that heartfelt leap
And told me,"I Love You"
12 comments:
one of the finest i ever read. really, i had no clue u were a combination of frost and milton ;)..super
"rofl"..thanks.;)..but i'm no combination..can't string together two lines..but dis just needed to be written i guess!..
well, if possible, that's even better!
really .....awesome!
awesome sravs!!!!
thanks deeksh!:)...
thanks yash!!;)
nice one sravani its relli good:-d
thanks manch!!!>:D<
Its been long since i read a poem that touched my heart so deep, which brought a smile on my face.... beautiful one....
thanks varun!!:D
keka post sravani....fida aipoya
thanks aditya!!:)
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