Thursday, February 18, 2010

And he told me...

As i looked into his eyes
And found his longing stare
I stopped myself from saying words
That would show how much i care

I put my hand upto his face
To hold my feelings in
I wouldn't say the words again
To show my love for him

The last time I had told him
How much he meant to me
He put my hands away from his
And said to leave him be

I never spoke the words again
For fear of his deep fright
I thought it was the last time
Until that blissful night

His fingers traced around my face
Pushing hair away
And I was quite unprepared
For what he was to say

My heart beat quickly,my head raced on
I thought that I might cry
He looked as if he might faint-
Imagine this strong guy

But never would I be more impressed
With anything he'd do
Than when he took that heartfelt leap
And told me,"I Love You"

12 comments:

sirish aditya said...

one of the finest i ever read. really, i had no clue u were a combination of frost and milton ;)..super

Sravani said...

"rofl"..thanks.;)..but i'm no combination..can't string together two lines..but dis just needed to be written i guess!..

sirish aditya said...

well, if possible, that's even better!

Deekshith Vemuganti said...

really .....awesome!

yashu said...

awesome sravs!!!!

Sravani said...

thanks deeksh!:)...
thanks yash!!;)

Sai Kishore Bandaru said...

nice one sravani its relli good:-d

Sravani said...

thanks manch!!!>:D<

varun said...

Its been long since i read a poem that touched my heart so deep, which brought a smile on my face.... beautiful one....

Sravani said...

thanks varun!!:D

aditya gattoju said...

keka post sravani....fida aipoya

Sravani said...

thanks aditya!!:)